I've worked with the US ME/CFS Clinician Coalition on this document and can provide feedback to them if you wish. In the meantime, I wanted to give my own perspective on the discussion so far. I'm speaking for myself and not on behalf of the clinicians.
Thank you for the background information.Your work and that of the clinicians is appreciated.
Some more feedback.
There's a lot that's good about this document, especially its brevity and its focus on PEM, but I think the document suffers from the authors knowing too much and being too deeply involved in the topic. That may sound paradoxical but it is their in-depth knowledge that frequently leads experts to being unable to envisage how their output will be interpreted by non-experts. The linguistic equivalent of Murphy's Law applies: if it can be misunderstood it will be misunderstood. The expert authors know what they mean. We, the expert patients, know what they mean. But does your average family doctor? Or the newly-diagnosed patient?
It's highly likely many in the latter two groups will misunderstand parts of the document and that's because it's human nature to try to make sense of difficult new stuff by linking it to stuff we already know and are comfortable with. This applies to doctors, too, and three things most doctors do know about are TATT (tired all the time), the "fact" that CFS is all about fatigue, and post-exertional
fatigue (because it occurs in a number of other conditions).
Those three things will therefore form the frame of reference into which doctors will try to fit what they read about ME.
In addition, when old and new knowledge aren't very clearly separated in our brains we often don't remember the new knowledge long-term but revert back to the old. Cue another variant of Murphy's law: if it can be misremembered it will be misremembered.
Because of the above the word fatigue should only ever appear once in the document, in the title, for example:
"Myalgic Encephalomyelitis (also known as Chronic Fatigue Syndrome or ME/CFS)" - and thereafter be banned. Every mention of the f****** word just further reinforces the preconceived notion that ME is about tiredness. When talking about the symptom of f****** it could be replaced by "extreme exhaustion" for example.
"The fatigue is profound, not lifelong, not the result of ongoing exertion, and not alleviated by rest." The underlined parts are problematic. They directly contradict the concept of PEM: exertion increases symptoms including fatigue/exhaustion, conversely rest and pacing alleviate symptoms including fatigue/exhaustion.
Yes, there are many cases where it may appear as though rest does not help. There are the milder cases who keep trying to lead a normal life and who never rest enough to get themselves out of permanent PEM, and there are the very severe who simply cannot rest enough to escape permanent PEM. Those in the middle, however, who have learned to pace, will often report substantial reductions in fatigue/exhaustion during non-PEM periods
How about changing the above sentence to
"The exhaustion is profound, not lifelong, not the result of excessive exertion, and not fully alleviated by normal amounts of rest"? ("Excessive exertion" here refers to what a healthy person would view as excessive; there's probably a clearer way to express the point but it's eluding me right now. ETA: I finally found what I was trying to express: "
out of proportion to the triggering exertion" instead of "
excessive exertion").
As I explained in my previous post, the explanation given for PEM leaves room for it to be misinterpreted as the sort of post-exertional
fatigue doctors already know from other conditions. My neighbour gets disproportionately tired after minor exertion and takes a long time to recover. That would fit the definition of PEM in the document. Does my neighbour have ME? No, he has a heart condition.
This part of the definition is the most problematic:
"patients can experience an exacerbation of one or all of their symptoms" because if the only symptom that gets exacerbated happens to be fatigue, especially if it happens without any delay (
"the crash, which may be immediate but more often delayed"), that wouldn't be very specific to ME.
How about changing to "
patients typically experience an exacerbation of many or all of their symptoms, and symptoms may have no obvious link to the triggering activity, for example a taking a shower may cause flu-like symptoms the following day"? After all, who is so lucky as to get PEM with only a single symptom getting worse?!