Ravn
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Some suggestions:
For the purpose of this particular paper I would suggest simply stating that more females than males have an ME/CFS diagnosis. It's not relevant here whether it's 3:1 or 5:1 or whatever
In fact, on reflection, much of the introduction section could be shortened significantly as it has little relevance to the study itself. IMO there's really no need for every ME study to repeat all the general background and stats (which are often poorly evidenced), instead just link to a review on all that (sorry, can't think of a good one on top of my head). All that's needed for this particular study are the bits in bold
Some suggestions:
For the purpose of this particular paper I would suggest simply stating that more females than males have an ME/CFS diagnosis. It's not relevant here whether it's 3:1 or 5:1 or whatever
Ref #51 only describes post-exertional fatigue, also states this gets better with exercise. Can't categorically discount PEM happening here - could be the authors gave a poor description of PEM due to their focus on fatigue, and that the study cited for the improvement with exercise is just as poor as the ME GET studies - but if there is PEM in primary biliary cholangitis this paper doesn't show it.paper said:To our knowledge, the overall combination of blood marker changes we observed does not present in any other disease. For example, although primary biliary cholangitis is accompanied by elevated ALP and GGT levels (and post-exertional malaise [51]) it is also marked by high circulating levels of bilirubin rather than the lower levels we observe for ME (Fig. 2A).
For anaemia only intensive exercise is contraindicated, other exercise is still recommended. It's probably the same for the other conditions. I wonder if this section is necessary to have at all? Or if it can be made less specific? Really all that can be claimed is that some types of exercise are contraindicated in some health conditions, typically (always?) that's intensive exercise which is cautioned against, and nobody is recommending intensive exercise for MEpaper said:According to UK National Health Service guidance, exercise is “the miracle cure we’ve all been waiting for” [5]. Nevertheless, exercise is not a universal panacea: it is contraindicated among those with cardiovascular disease, anaemia and hyperthyroidism, for example
In fact, on reflection, much of the introduction section could be shortened significantly as it has little relevance to the study itself. IMO there's really no need for every ME study to repeat all the general background and stats (which are often poorly evidenced), instead just link to a review on all that (sorry, can't think of a good one on top of my head). All that's needed for this particular study are the bits in bold
introduction said:Physical inactivity accelerates the loss of cardiovascular and strength fitness, shortens healthspan and increases all-cause mortality risk [1, 2, 3]. It lowers insulin sensitivity and elevates the synthesis of triglyceride, ceramide and sphingomyelin in muscle [4]. According to UK National Health Service guidance, exercise is “the miracle cure we’ve all been waiting for” [5]. Nevertheless, exercise is not a universal panacea: it is contraindicated among those with cardiovascular disease, anaemia and hyperthyroidism, for example [6]. A patient might also only accept exercise as treatment if they believe its benefit outweighs its cost [7]. Myalgic encephalomyelitis (ME; also known as chronic fatigue syndrome, CFS) is a [suggestion: an often debilitating] disease of unknown pathogenesis defined by post-exertional malaise (PEM), the [suggestion: a specific pattern of] dramatic worsening of symptoms after even minor mental or physical exertion [8]], which usually lasts at least 24 hours, in contrast to other fatiguing illnesses [9]. ME has no cure and no widely effective therapy [10]. About 10% of people experiencing viral (such as with Epstein-Barr, Ross River virus or SARS-CoV-2 virus) or bacterial (such as with Coxiella burnetii) infection subsequently present ME or ME-like symptoms [11, 12]. In addition, over one-third of people with ME report not experiencing an infectious episode preceding their initial symptoms [13, 14]. Full recovery from ME is rare, at about 5% [15]. It is a female-dominant disease, with females outnumbering males by up to five-to-one; females also report more severe symptoms [13, 14]. In common with many female-biased diseases it has a high burden (e.g., in disability-adjusted life years) and low overall research funding [16]. ME is not rare, as it affects 0.19% − 0.86% of people in western countries [17, 18]. Individuals with ME commonly report PEM, pain, fatigue, sensitivities to noise, and cognitive and autonomic deficits [13] and a health-related quality of life worse than 20 other conditions [19].
There are no clinical biomarkers for ME. A high priority for people with ME is an accurate and reliable diagnostic test [20]. Findings from dozens of biomarker studies have shown limited reproducibility, perhaps due to their typically low sample sizes, their frequent use of inappropriate statistical tests [21] and the known heterogeneity of ME’s symptoms and potentially aetiology [22].
Whilst cardiopulmonary exercise testing does not initially differentiate between people with ME and control individuals, it does so in a follow-up test one day later [23, 24]. This test, however, is not in common use because it risks triggering PEM.
Any clinical biomarker would need to account for individuals’ inactivity relative to the general population. This is because many people with ME do not exercise and often restrict their activity [25] to reduce the risk of subsequent PEM. Some have proposed that it is this avoidance of activity that inhibits recovery by perpetuating ME symptoms following an acute illness [26, 27, 28]. However, therapies based on physical activity or exercise are not effective as a cure [29], implying that ME is instead an ongoing organic illness [30, 31]. It has also been claimed that any physiological abnormalities seen in people with ME might be caused by their inactivity [32].
In this study, we undertake 3 groups of analyses using UK Biobank (UKB) data [33][suggestion: clarify this is not the Cure ME biobank] on (i) 31 blood cell and 30 blood biochemistry phenotypes; (ii) 251 NMR-measured metabolites; and, (iii) 2,923 proteins. Specifically, we quantify which blood traits, Nuclear Magnetic Resonance (NMR) metabolomics, and proteomics features are significantly different between ME cases versus controls, for males or females, or all combined, controlling for age (and sex for male and female combined analyses). The large UK Biobank data sets for ME cases and controls provided substantial statistical power to evaluate hypotheses, also allowing comparison between male-only and female-only analyses, something that had not been previously achievable. We take advantage of three mediators of sedentary lifestyle to determine whether any molecular or cellular trait associated with ME cases is explicable by physical inactivity.[suggestion: rewrite to only mention each point once e.g male-female, 3 mediators]