Can you explain more about what you think such an article should include?
It should justify the statements made.
The NICE advice on diagnosis is just a rough and ready approximation to what is really needed - an understanding of why a label is being used. Rather than say that ME is a disease and PEM is the most important symptom I would say something more like. 'ME/CFS is thought to be a useful term for identifying a subgroup of people with long term disability with intolerance of exertion typically experienced as post-exertional malaise. PEM is commonly associated with intolerance of other sensory stimuli, unrefreshing sleep...
In a sense it not so much that PEM is a key feature of ME/CFS but ME/CFS is the way we pick out a PEM-type illness. The NICE guidelines are for people with PEM (in simple terms) so criticism of the guidelines on the grounds that PEM is not a diagnostic feature is just missing the point.
The activity management may be right but there is no more evidence for rest and pacing than there is for GET. The piece should say that no reliable evidence is available for any management approach from trials but patient experience is that rest and pacing are most useful for coping.
DwME can say ME is not psychosomatic until they are blue in the face but without anything to support it the psychiatrists will simply go on thinking this is the patients' preoccupation with what they want to believe.
The complex multisystem terminology is in the NICE guideline too.
Yes, and it has no business there.
anything that tells psychs the Wessely followers are wrong has to be an improvement.
But if it makes the advocacy community wide open to the scoffing of Wessely and co so that they can now point fingers and say 'I told you so, these are hypocrites who have no more evidence than we do' is no way an improvement. It is the way to let the Royal Colleges win next time around.
I understand the good intentions but the naivety seems to me likely to do a lot of harm. I am very ready to try to help to make this stuff look convincing, but if I am not wanted I am not going to push the point.