Neil, where do you get that idea about "once the initial illness has passed?" Maybe your "initial illness" has passed, but my pathogens like me so much some of them have stuck around for 30 years. Although I'd rather have that darling Cavalier King Charles Spaniel for company. Please send.
If you are sincere about your article being solely about your own experience you need to learn to control "voice" when you write. Your diction and syntax in this add up to a prescriptive "voice." In fact, at times you sound more like White & Weaselly then like a patient. You don't need to say "may" or "perhaps" to be personal. But more use of the first person and less of the second person would help. Also more honest sharing of your feelings and thoughts and less of prescribing for others. The 19th century pioneering psychologist William James advocated forming habits, but offered doing so as a well thought out protocol that could relieve patients' suffering by easing stress and simplifying tasks.
If you are sincere about your article being solely about your own experience you need to learn to control "voice" when you write. Your diction and syntax in this add up to a prescriptive "voice." In fact, at times you sound more like White & Weaselly then like a patient. You don't need to say "may" or "perhaps" to be personal. But more use of the first person and less of the second person would help. Also more honest sharing of your feelings and thoughts and less of prescribing for others. The 19th century pioneering psychologist William James advocated forming habits, but offered doing so as a well thought out protocol that could relieve patients' suffering by easing stress and simplifying tasks.