Personally, I tripped on the sentence
"ME/CFS is not an understood ’biopsychosocial’ process, but nor is it a clearly defined disease of which we understand the physiological mechanism." and it has to do with the linguistic build; these two statements are juxtaposed as equals, and they are both stated in a "what they are not" way.
I think it would be better to rephrase as something like: "ME/CFS is not an understood ’biopsychosocial’ process. It is a roughly defined disease of which we understand as yet too little of the physiological mechanism." (It is not this. It is this.)
I think David Davies-Pane wrote what might be the basis of a good, elucidating follow-up sentence: "While the research clues implicate e.g., immunometabolic and neurovascular dysfunction, the evidence is currently not mature and robust."
The following paragraph that mentions McEvedy and Bears is messy and breaks the flow of the article (and why even bring them up in the first place if they are not your topic and their analysis is irrelevant anyway for what you are saying?). Personally, I'd pull out the whole first half of it, pick up at "ME/CFS has no identified tissue pathology." (which connects to the previous paragraph), although rephrased as something like "ME/CFS has no consistent identified tissue pathology."
Jonathan, I get that you find it very important that people do not inflate what is known about ME/CFS, which is good. But you need to take into account how you phrase that, especially in the current context.
Honestly, I found your response to Lucibee insulting and deflective, which is a pity when discussing a possible less strongly executed part of your article. She rightly points out that a good portion of readers will have been "anchored" to the belief that there is no biomedical or physiological cause of ME - the psychosomatic movement has been misrepresenting scientific uncertainty to that effect for decades, and media outlets have until recently been parroting that far and wide. This same movement has also invested heavily in "educating" health care workers and researchers with these claims.
So to wave aside her concern that some detailed parts of your text might read like "the implication is that there is no evidence, meaning such pathways don't exist and will never be found to exist", especially to a pre-influenced audience, with
An editor might think that but not any scientist or properly trained medic I know of!!
is just uncalled for, and nonsensical as an argument. If you are still content with your chosen words after consideration of the criticism, that's fine, but that the exact substance of what you mean is generally evident as some theoretical, "high quality" labeled readers will get it, at least by your assumption, is just nonsense (and rude because you insinuate that editors -which Lucibee is- are just not as smart and enlightened). It's actually a good editor who points out any disconnect between what you as author expect from your readers, and what readers are actually like and will be able to take from the article.
(Also, really, I hope your article gets read far outside of the circle of scientists and "properly trained" medics you know of

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