I'm not convinced about the idea of a more severe illness being a predictor of ME/CFS.There is quite a lot of evidence that severity of illness is important in the risk of ME/CFS post infection:
We haven't seen that with Covid-19. Lots of people seem to get ME/CFS after a mild illness.
I've commented elsewhere that I'm not sure that the Dubbo study authors were right when they drew that conclusion about the correlation with illness severity. There was a gap between illness onset and the first contact with the researchers. So, what they observed possibly was just that people still reporting symptoms 6 weeks or whatever it was after illness onset were more likely to report persisting symptoms at 6 months. The measure of illness severity wasn't hospitalisation.
The example of Peter White that you give is along the same lines. Persisting (ME/CFS) symptoms could make it seem like the acute illness had a long duration, but it doesn't necessarily mean that the infection was a life-threatening one. Illness duration isn't the same as illness intensity.